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My best movie is ‘A Clockwork Orange,’ produced by Stanley Kubrick. This movie’s story goes
like this. The movie’s main character, Alexander DeLarge, is a juvenile delinquents. He always doing
evil deed with his friends like rape or violence. One day, he hear the news of some rich women’s
house is in a defenseless state. So he and his friends went that house and killed her impulsively.
After that case, Alexander was arrested and he is sentenced to 14 years. After 2 years, He
volunteer to Luduvico treatment. Luduvico treatment is experimental treatment conducted by
government that is to cure serial offender. If he see antisocial act, he begin to feel disgust. After
endure this painful treatment for 2 weeks, he go back to the world. Absurdly, he meet his own
victim, and he undergo same crime like what he did. After he is struck by police officers who were
Alexander’s friends , he go to the house that he raped house owner’s wife when several years ago.
The house owner realize that Alex is the criminal who was raped his wife, and Alex is tortured by
house owner, after all Alex throw himself to the window. After he wake up at hospital, Alex meet the
Secretary of Interior and he say that the Luduvico treatment was mistake and he wants to sorry to
Alex. And they take a picture for newspaper. While he pose for a photograph, he is thinking about
great sex with beautiful girl and narrator(Alex) says “I was cured. all right!” The reasons why I love
this movie are first, Malcolm McDowell(Alexander DeLarge) showed excellent performance in this film.
Additionally, this movie shows incurable sourceful evil of psychopath pleasantly. For this reasons, I
like this movie very much.
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My favorite(best) movie is ‘A Clockwork Orange’ produced by Stanley Kubrick.
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This movie’s story goes like this.
The movie’s main character, Alexander DeLarge, is a juvenile delinquents.
He had always been doing evil deed like rape or violence with his friends.
동사가 틀려서 제가 고쳤네요
뒷부분의 시제가 과거라
저질러 왔다는 의미로
그리고 with his friends 는
뒤로 옮기는게 더 명확할 듯요
One day, he heard (the news) that (of) some rich women’s house was (is) in a defenseless state.
hear는 과거로 고쳤구요
hear that절 로 그냥 쓰는게
간단하구요
news는 빼는게 날듯해서
So he and his friends went to(빼먹으신) that house and killed her impulsively.
After that case, Alexander was arrested and he was(과거) sentenced to 14 years. After 2 years, He volunteered(과거) for(to가 아닌걸로) Luduvico treatment program.
Luduvico program was an experimental treatment
program conducted by government to cure serial offenders.
After that,
when he saw(과거) an antisocial action, he began(과거) to feel disgust. After enduring(동명사) this painful treatment for 2 weeks, he went(과거) back to the world. Absurdly, he met(과거) his victim and he did(undergo는 자신이 겪는다는 의미에요)
the same crime like what he did.
After he was struck by police officers who were his(이름대신) friends , he went to the house where(that) he raped the house owner’s wife (when -필요없겠죠) several years ago.
The house owner realized(과거) that Alex was the criminal who was raped his wife, and Alex was tortured by the house owner, after all Alex throw himself to the window. After he wake up at hospital, Alex met the Secretary of Interior(이건 무슨단어죠?) and the officer said that the Luduvico treatment was a mistake and he wanted to say sorry to Alex. And they took a picture for an article. While he was posing for the photograph, he was thinking about having a great sex with a beautiful girl.
The narrator(Alex) says “I was cured. All right!”
The reasons why I love this movie are the following.
First, Malcolm McDowell(Alexander DeLarge) showed excellent performance in this film. Additionally, this movie shows incurable sourceful evil of psychopath pleasantly. For these reasons, I like this movie very much.
2014.04.11.
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